<Wip> <Progressive House/Trance> Blossom

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<Wip> <Progressive House/Trance> Blossom

Postby TheMalenEst » 09 Apr 2013 16:41

http://soundcloud.com/themalenest/blossom-wip

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Re: <Wip> <Progressive House/Trance> Blossom

Postby topitmunkeydog » 09 Apr 2013 16:49

Absolutely gorgeous! I can't wait for the final version of the track to come out, yet I have no idea how this could be improved because it's just so exquisite... Love the first half of it especially, lik before the drums come in but the actual trancey part is also really relaxing and pretty. I applaud you!
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Re: <Wip> <Progressive House/Trance> Blossom

Postby TheMalenEst » 09 Apr 2013 17:52

topitmunkeydog wrote:Absolutely gorgeous! I can't wait for the final version of the track to come out, yet I have no idea how this could be improved because it's just so exquisite... Love the first half of it especially, lik before the drums come in but the actual trancey part is also really relaxing and pretty. I applaud you!


Wonderful to hear :D well i'm pretty done actually, some fine EQ'ing and mixing and i feel pretty done.
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Re: <Wip> <Progressive House/Trance> Blossom

Postby HMage » 09 Apr 2013 18:14

Damn I so want to listen to this, but can't right now :(
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Re: <Wip> <Progressive House/Trance> Blossom

Postby Stars In Autumn » 09 Apr 2013 19:09

Wow! Really beautiful! Great work on the wide saw synth and the ducking works well I think. It's a bit obvious it comes off ducking when you take the kick away at the end of a segment.
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Re: <Wip> <Progressive House/Trance> Blossom

Postby ph00tbag » 09 Apr 2013 19:58

I can hear what you mean about sc making your kicks sound weird. I assume the final product is going to be more of a proggy thump and less of a dark psy laser zap?

That said, I like the general feel that you're going for. With a better kick it'll have a nice groove. The guitar in the breakdown is really nice, too.
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Re: <Wip> <Progressive House/Trance> Blossom

Postby HMage » 10 Apr 2013 03:10

I'm enjoying this.

Replace the kick and stop playing bass notes during breakdown and you're nearly there.
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