<Pony><Original> Cloudstorm

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<Pony><Original> Cloudstorm

Postby SeriousArthos » 09 Apr 2013 09:52

Hi there, everyone!

I wanted to start making music for a long time, but only now I decided to actually try. I'm just a beginner, and I don't really know lots of the concepts and techniques, so I'm looking for advice and knowledge!

This is the first thing I've done in FL Studio (or in any DAW, for that matter), so, fire away! c:

(kinda inspired in a stormy Cloudsdale)

Last edited by SeriousArthos on 11 Apr 2013 09:26, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: <Pony><Original> Cloudstorm

Postby topitmunkeydog » 09 Apr 2013 16:42

I like it ok. Very minimalist and aggressive. That one synth at around 1:30 just repeats one too many times though, like before the drop. I simply ADORE the last bit of the song, it's totally sophisticated and stuff. Reminds me of Rival Consoles if you don't mind me saying that.
EDIT: Oh, and welcome to the forums! I noticed you were new here so.. :)
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Re: <Pony><Original> Cloudstorm

Postby SeriousArthos » 09 Apr 2013 22:33

Thanks for the feedback and for welcoming me! :3

I followed your advice and reduced the times that bit repeats, not only at 1:30 but later on too. I really think it sounds better now, thank you! I updated the first post with a YouTube link.

And... Why would I mind? I didn't really get that part :V
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