<pony> <farm music> <Kind of original i guess> AppleJack

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<pony> <farm music> <Kind of original i guess> AppleJack

Postby Captivated » 03 Mar 2013 21:40

https://soundcloud.com/david-granados-2/captivated-applejack

Yeah so here's some applejack inspired music

*cough* Lon Lon Ranch rip-off *cough*

some feedback would be awesome :D
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Re: <pony> <farm music> <Kind of original i guess> AppleJack

Postby Callenby » 03 Mar 2013 23:17

I'm logging off the computer in a second but before I do I want to give some quick feedback.

I've never heard of Lon Lon Ranch so on that score I can't help you.

I would suggest either removing or changing that choir patch (that is supposed to be a choir, right?). It sounds very out of place here, or at least that's how I feel.

The timbre changes perhaps a little too much too often. You don't necessarily have to add or remove any patches, just edit them make it a tad more consistent as a whole. That may have more to do with personal taste, though, so you can ignore that. You can ignore everything I say, actually.

That's all I can give right now, sorry. I hope it helps.
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