[Non-pony][Christian/Worship][Electro] Afflicted

[AndrewClocksin]

Hey guys, here's a worship-ish electronic song I've been working on, just wanted to know what you all think! Hope the lyrics speak to you.

[vladnuke]

It's pretty kewl, in generic Christian song kinda way. The vocals need to be clearer, the snare needs to be snappier, the reese needs to be clearer. Also you included all the proper ChristMemesTM (you sure did hit every buzzword), and the generic windows background with cheesy font was a really nice touch. I'd have to say that this definitely looks like something I would see playing in the background of a sermon while the pastor fumbles around looking for something. Also ok piano, but lay off the reverb, it makes stuff really muddy if you over-do it.

And for a Christian song, I saw a surprising lack of cheesy Nexus vocal pads, should probably fix that.

[AndrewClocksin]

It's pretty kewl, in generic Christian song kinda way. The vocals need to be clearer, the snare needs to be snappier, the reese needs to be clearer. Also you included all the proper ChristMemesTM (you sure did hit every buzzword), and the generic windows background with cheesy font was a really nice touch. I'd have to say that this definitely looks like something I would see playing in the background of a sermon while the pastor fumbles around looking for something. Also ok piano, but lay off the reverb, it makes stuff really muddy if you over-do it.

And for a Christian song, I saw a surprising lack of cheesy Nexus vocal pads, should probably fix that.

Haha, well thanks for the feedback! I'll try improve those things on future songs.