<Pony> <Colab> <WIP> Untittled Drumstep...

[Nexaka]

Hey me and a friend of mine collabed on the track, my friend will be rapping and I made this instrumental here. Since we are struggling on lyrics, I was hoping I'd get some more feedback on the instrumental, and perhaps some ideas too that would make it more awesome?
I'd really appreciate any and all feedback! Thanks in advance :3!
http://soundcloud.com/nexaka/drumstep-collab-wip
(info about instrumental: I kinda based it off the structure Netsky used in his track, "Come Alive".)

[Element6]

I really like it! The beat is powerful and it has a nice energetic feeling. I'll be interested to see how rapping will be incorporated into the track. Not to mention I'd love to hear it once it's finished.

Does your friend have any previous work to show? Or a SoundCloud or anything?

[Nexaka]

Wow dude hehe thanks!
Um... for my friend here's his cover of "Beyond Your Tomb"
It's really good and was the song that made me wanna collab with him:
http://soundcloud.com/rainbowdash200/beyond-her-tomb-cover

[Element6]

No problem!

And hey, yeah, that really is good. I don't know much about rap, it's not a genre I commonly listen to, but his timing seems to be spot on. To be honest, I genuinely thought it was Mic when it first started. I guess that makes it a successful cover, huh?

I was only wondering because you hadn't mentioned who your friend was in the original post, and I was quite curious. One thing I noticed was that he said in the SoundCloud description that Beyond her Tomb was the first song he ever covered. The song isn't too old, so he must still be rather new with rapping and stuff. I assume so, anyway. That's pretty impressive!

[Nexaka]

Hehe awesome bro, I'll tell him you said that, thanks!

Also, to everyone else, I still need some feedback, I really don't feel like this track is... complete yet, like it's missing something, if anyone has any ideas, I'll gladly take them into serious consideration! Thanks! X3