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<pony><original><house> Looking for feedback!

Postby TheLonging » 19 Aug 2012 20:12



Basically the idea I'm going for with this project of mine I'm starting would be like if Octavia and Vinyl Scratch worked together, combining Octavia's love of the classical/orchestral and Vinyl Scratch's love of the electronic. I'm trying to do a wide range of stuff like drum and bass, house, dubstep, and so on.

This is my second song from the project, this being a remix of sorts that I did of the first song. Am I on the right track here? I'd love some feedback and comments and listens c:
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Re: <pony><original><house> Looking for feedback!

Postby vladnuke » 19 Aug 2012 21:25

lol glitch.
Anyway, the harder growls kinda clash with the bouncy-ness of the song. They just stand out so far that I'd consider cutting them completely and replacing them with something a little less growly. Especially with house. What did you use for the piano, it seems to have a hard cut everytime a chord is played. Also the outro is a little plain, maybe have something else going on as the song fades out?

Overall, I'd bring in a little more progression, fix up the piano, and cut out the growls and replace them with something else. Then again:

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Re: <pony><original><house> Looking for feedback!

Postby TheLonging » 20 Aug 2012 21:35

Oops, just remembered about this.

vladnuke wrote:lol glitch.
1) Anyway, the harder growls kinda clash with the bouncy-ness of the song. They just stand out so far that I'd consider cutting them completely and replacing them with something a little less growly. Especially with house. 2) What did you use for the piano, it seems to have a hard cut everytime a chord is played. 3) Also the outro is a little plain, maybe have something else going on as the song fades out?

Overall, I'd bring in a little more progression, fix up the piano, and cut out the growls and replace them with something else. Then again:

>my opinion


1) I kind of like that sound, but I guess. I wanna keep that kind of aggressiveness but it is a bit obtrusive. Any suggestions?

2) It's a sample of a piano used in the reprise of the song (that I made first). There isn't a hard cut actually, the chords do fade out. I just put the chords on top while they fade out.

3) Yeah, I'll definitely improve on that. I do like repetitiveness in house music, but I'll see what I can do.

Thanks!
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