<Pony><Original> Trial and Error

[Mishtar]

This track was a really long and interesting practice session, filled with all sorts of experiments

Basically, Dashie is trying out some new aerial acrobatics while I'm trying to make music.

http://soundcloud.com/mishtar/trial-and-error

All critique, tips and suggestions are welcome. This is just my third song so don't yell at me (too much).

[thatguyzeke]

Overall i really enjoyed it! Really happy sounding and relaxing.

The builds ups felt good, though near the end it felt just a bit repetitive, that might be more my own taste then anything else.

My only real complaint was the ending felt really abrupt. A sudden ending like that didn't feel right with such a calming track.

[Mishtar]

Overall i really enjoyed it! Really happy sounding and relaxing.

The builds ups felt good, though near the end it felt just a bit repetitive, that might be more my own taste then anything else.

My only real complaint was the ending felt really abrupt. A sudden ending like that didn't feel right with such a calming track.

Hmm... yeah now that you point it out, the ending is too sudden. I guess I listened to that part too many times while making the song to be able to judge it properly.

Excuses, excuses... I'll make sure to work much harder next time and pay more attention

Thanks a lot for the feedback!