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<Original><Pony> Learning

Postby HatBrony » 24 Mar 2012 05:58

http://soundcloud.com/hatbrony/learning

Note to self: Never EVER rush music again, because then it sucks. HARD. Can anyone tell that it's rushed? Also, I would appreciate some general feedback.
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Genre: uhhhh... Pianocore, maybe? I have no idea what it is.

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Re: <Original><Pony> Learning

Postby Freewave » 24 Mar 2012 08:29

Well its a start. I won't kid you, pianocore is a genre that only brand new DAW users seem to try and its indicative of being a rookie. The instruments you are using are the general in the box midi or defaults and even the nice glitches aren't going to be terribly helpful.

Now a question...how is this pony? If you have to describe it afterthefact and its not clear beforehand you might want to figure out what you're trying to get across in that music and how it pertains to the show and make sure that's communicated (you don't need samples but stamping pony on an instrumental isn't really cutting it).

There's no need to rush this as an unfinished track that's rushed will only sound unfinished and incomplete and this still needs a lot of work. Keep working on this, add more instruments, and layers but also add some cohesiveness. I recommend getting better midi instruments then what you are using and then also have an idea on what your track IS and how it relates to the show and make sure it communicates emotionally to other people. I liked Pinkie Gets Electric so perhaps this is just needing some more attention as a track and further development.
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