<wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

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<wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby SeventhElement » 19 Mar 2012 16:54

lol I guess I had the same idea as Facade. Ah well, enjoy, let me know what you think.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/61146575/Winter%20Wrap%20Up.mp3

(There will be an intro eventually, I forgot about it before exporting and uploading, will do it later)
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby the4thImpulse » 19 Mar 2012 17:08

The vocals seem a bit off in the beginning and they seem a little loud compared to everything else, the dubstep bassline could use some variation in the lfo speed. Everything else sounds really good, nice work!

I thought it was fine without an intro, just saying.
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby Facade » 19 Mar 2012 17:37

this is great the intro needs a little work though other then that great work!
oh im curious how did you get the lyrics in snyc? i couldnt get mine in sync for the life of me so i left em out
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby SeventhElement » 19 Mar 2012 18:03

I found a MIDI of the song on Everypony Sings, didn't mess with the tempos AT ALL. They are weird tempos, like 97->112->116 and stuff like that. I aligned the vocals with the MIDI and it worked out rather well.

As far as the bass line goes, it wasn't intentionally supposed to wobble, but I'll play with it :D
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby SeventhElement » 19 Mar 2012 18:09

Also how is this getting off sync in the begginning? I can't hear it >_<
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby Facade » 19 Mar 2012 18:21

brokensyntax wrote:Also how is this getting off sync in the begginning? I can't hear it >_<

i think he ment off volume/level wise i can kinda hear that too
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby the4thImpulse » 19 Mar 2012 18:56

brokensyntax wrote:Also how is this getting off sync in the begginning? I can't hear it >_<

Oops, I guess I was hearing things, I listened to it again and its sounded good :lol: but yes it still seems a bit loud in places.
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby SeventhElement » 19 Mar 2012 19:56

Ok, turned vocals down and made the sub sine wobble, also added a glitch here and there. What do you guys think now?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/61146575/Winter%20Wrap%20Up.mp3
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby Facade » 19 Mar 2012 20:17

sounding great! loving the wobble :D
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby the4thImpulse » 19 Mar 2012 20:44

The vocals are working much better now, great track!
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby SeventhElement » 19 Mar 2012 21:13

Alrighty! Links up on soundcloud and eqbeats!

http://soundcloud.com/seventh-element/winter-wrap-up-seventh-element

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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby SENSE1 » 20 Mar 2012 00:47

I'm loving the different sounding vocal effects you've got goin on, and I really dig the piano going along with them, it helps establish the beat a little bit more for me. I'm liking the different drum change ups you've put in as well, great song structure :) My one critique is with the vocals in the last part of the song. I'm not sure if you put them a bit later than the piano on purpose, but they seem a bit off and out of time to me. Other than that, its sounding pretty sweet, nice work brony! :)
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby Coughy » 24 Mar 2012 21:23

Just wanted to say that I hear the offsync issue as well~
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Re: <wip><pony><remix>Winter Wrap Up

Postby SeventhElement » 25 Mar 2012 01:41

At the end there it is off, that is purpose full. I have removed a bunch of stuff from my track to show you the cleanest comparison.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/61146575/Winter ... 20shit.mp3
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