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<Wip><Pony> The Broken Promise (Applejack's Promise)

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<Wip><Pony> The Broken Promise (Applejack's Promise)

Postby spacebaseloop » 12 Mar 2012 00:36



I need some crutiuques please!
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Re: <Wip><Pony> The Broken Promise (Applejack's Promise)

Postby Gray Ham » 12 Mar 2012 01:52

It sounds like the hi-hat is out of sync with the beat, or something along the lines of that.
Other than that, it sounds like a good start. :)
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Re: <Wip><Pony> The Broken Promise (Applejack's Promise)

Postby spacebaseloop » 12 Mar 2012 01:54

Gray Ham wrote:It sounds like the hi-hat is out of sync with the beat, or something along the lines of that.
Other than that, it sounds like a good start. :)


I have really changed this track since this upload but any crtisisms help.
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