<WIP> Song For Twilight

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<WIP> Song For Twilight

Postby Meelz » 31 Jan 2012 03:58

http://soundcloud.com/trogdor1oh1/song-for-twilight-final-midi

About damn time I do a fully original pony song. This will be recorded with real instruments and proper singing.
This is supposed to coincide with another project I'm doing called Meelz Sparkle. Let me know what you guys think :)
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Re: <WIP> Song For Twilight

Postby randomblockfilms » 31 Jan 2012 18:22

oo the intrumental sounds good! but a bit mono. maybe use some paning and chorus effects, especially on the vocals.
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Re: <WIP> Song For Twilight

Postby Meelz » 01 Feb 2012 00:50

This is purely to demonstrate the instrumentation, it's gonna be completely re-recorded. In no way was this supposed to demonstrate the quality of the actual song imo, MIDI should generally never exist in rock imho(this may or may not be aimed at certain Brony musicians around here :D)
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Re: <WIP> Song For Twilight

Postby bigBerd » 01 Feb 2012 10:41

I really like the composition and the lyrics. The sound... well, it's a WIP, so I'm sure it'll sound great once recorded for real!
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Re: <WIP> Song For Twilight

Postby Meelz » 02 Feb 2012 11:36

Definitely, really looking forward to jumping in the studio ^_^
Lyrics wise, I suppose I'll note it here, trying not to spoil Meelz Sparkle here, the lyrics basically RP my character in there, being as adorkable as ever, crushing on Twilight. They're meant to be really lame, but cute. Hopefully I got that out :)
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Re: <WIP> Song For Twilight

Postby bigBerd » 02 Feb 2012 13:14

Yeah, it's totally cool. Anything corny and lame can be dismissed in the name of art. Besides, portraying a character through lyric can be challenging sometimes.
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Re: <WIP> Song For Twilight

Postby Meelz » 03 Feb 2012 03:06

It's the character that crushes hard on Twilight. Really hard. Totally not me. Not by a long shot, not even ironically. Just puttin' that out there.
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Re: <WIP> Song For Twilight

Postby MYCUTIEMARKISAGUN » 04 Feb 2012 23:04

Meelz wrote:MIDI should generally never exist in rock imho(this may or may not be aimed at certain Brony musicians around here :D)


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Re: <WIP> Song For Twilight

Postby Meelz » 06 Feb 2012 13:32

hayeeeeeeee~

damn I love stirring up controversy.

http://soundcloud.com/trogdor1oh1/song-for-twilight-literally
There, probably needs to be remastered or completely re-recorded
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