electro-blitz wrote:I need feedback /summary
Alright, I think that you biggest problem with singing is that you aren't properly "shaping the inside of your mouth", or I think that can be simplified to, you aren't using your soft pallet and tongue correctly. It's hard to explain, but when you sing, it sounds nasally because the tongue is high in the mouth and the nose muscles are tight. Here is an example of what I mean. Just singing the first two words from the song, the first go is my attempt to replicate or more nasal sound, and my second attempt is a non-nasal (I recorded them in one go, so they aren't perfect examples). Howcast actually has a video on the singing style and how to fix it right here. A few other things I noticed when taking a listen is that some of the notes you're singing a bit on the flat side, and the pitch seems to drop a bit as notes drag on and end. Other small things include starting up, sometimes the starts have the signature pitch wobble of trying to find the note, and some higher notes you seem to struggle at reaching (you must sing a low bass?). You may also want to practice making the singing sound interesting, because especially on long notes it occasionally sounds like you're just waiting for the note to be done. But, I'm assuming that this recording was done in one take?
