<remix><pony>I'll Show You My Loyalty(LutariFan Remix)

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<remix><pony>I'll Show You My Loyalty(LutariFan Remix)

Postby LutariFan » 05 Jan 2014 06:41

So I remixed this wonderful track by PhonyBrony and Feather:


This is how it turned out :)



Feedback is greatly appreciated ^-^
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Re: <remix><pony>I'll Show You My Loyalty(LutariFan Remix)

Postby LutariFan » 08 Jan 2014 06:06

Does anyone have an opinion?
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Re: <remix><pony>I'll Show You My Loyalty(LutariFan Remix)

Postby azerty » 08 Jan 2014 15:56

Whoops, just noticed this. Sure, I'll give it my two cents' worth.

For the record, I totally loved this. Uplifting, inventive melody, very catchy, and with creative bridges/fills. The vocals were also integrated very nicely, and were present in just the right places. The only thing (and this may be the fault of my own hardware) is that I didn't get a lot of low end; the kick drum felt kinda high and clicky, not super-full and roomy like a trance/prog-house kick, and there wasn't a lot of bass presence to go with the big saw melody at the chorus. Again, this may just be my non-expert ear (and equipment), but if anyone else can back me up on this, it's maybe something to take a second look at. Other than this very minor issue, this was an excellent song, and definitely going to get more than a few re-listens from me.
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Re: <remix><pony>I'll Show You My Loyalty(LutariFan Remix)

Postby LutariFan » 09 Jan 2014 08:45

azerty wrote:Whoops, just noticed this. Sure, I'll give it my two cents' worth.

For the record, I totally loved this. Uplifting, inventive melody, very catchy, and with creative bridges/fills. The vocals were also integrated very nicely, and were present in just the right places. The only thing (and this may be the fault of my own hardware) is that I didn't get a lot of low end; the kick drum felt kinda high and clicky, not super-full and roomy like a trance/prog-house kick, and there wasn't a lot of bass presence to go with the big saw melody at the chorus. Again, this may just be my non-expert ear (and equipment), but if anyone else can back me up on this, it's maybe something to take a second look at. Other than this very minor issue, this was an excellent song, and definitely going to get more than a few re-listens from me.


Wow, thanks a lot! :D

You know what, you may be right about that thing with the bass. It's something that people have noted before, that the bass level is a little low. I'll probably try to fix that in my next songs.
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