<Pony><Original> Apples to Apples, Dust to Dust

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<Pony><Original> Apples to Apples, Dust to Dust

Postby S.A.S.Falcon » 10 Oct 2013 08:06

Well, after about 4 months of having nothing, finally got an inspiration hit and made something, hope y'all like it!
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Re: <Pony><Original> Apples to Apples, Dust to Dust

Postby Conduit » 10 Oct 2013 14:43

As a battle theme I think this might work well, but on its own it gets kinda boring. It would be nice if there was a melody through part of it rather then the ostinato that you have running through most of it. There's little to no variation throughout it too, it would be nice to see the brass playing something other then block chords, and some timbrel changes throughout would add some spice to it.

Again, you did say this was a battle theme, and I can see it working well underneath a game, but for film or as a stand alone piece it gets tiresome. Anyway, nice work, it's always good to hear other orchestral composers.
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