Looking for some feedback (not pony)

[Black Snootie]

Hey, I was wondering if I could get some feedback with this song. It's something I made while learning how to use FL Studio, as well as my first real song. I like how it sounds, but I feel like it could be cooler. I have no idea what genre it would be though...but thanks in advance for any feedback!

http://soundcloud.com/us3l3ss1/somber-tranquility

[randomblockfilms]

hmmm sounds good! though maybe you could add more range in pitch. like instead of playing in the same spot on the keyboard.

[Overkillius]

good for a first "real" song! I recommend using the soundcloud embed feature next time. Look forward to hearing more from you