The abandoned Canterlot Mansion (BGM-ish)

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The abandoned Canterlot Mansion (BGM-ish)

Postby DasDeer » 27 Dec 2011 09:32

http://soundcloud.com/dasdeer/the-abandoned-mansion

A piece i've worked on the last week or so.

This one is a halloween-ish one. (A bit late, i know)

A little bit of back story and such:
There is a infamous mansion in Canterlot that's been abandoned and empty for several years. Everyobdy in Canterlot knows about it, but they never acknowledges it.
Many people say that it is haunted, and that they've seen ghosts and spirits in the broken windows. Celestia is not sure if it is haunted or not, and thus sends the Mane6 to explore and see what they can find.

So, with this one i tried to make it feel like a BGM for the show. I made it scary, but overall not too scary. (After all, MLP is made primarily for young girls)

It is still a WIP and i could really use some feedback.

So, what do you guys think? What should i improve, what is good, what is bad?

All feedback is appreciated, be it good or bad.
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Re: The abandoned Canterlot Mansion (BGM-ish)

Postby randomblockfilms » 27 Dec 2011 11:38

wow! i could actually picture this in an episode! great job! nothing too obvious that i would fix. probably cause i usually don't listen to this type of music regularly. lol
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Re: The abandoned Canterlot Mansion (BGM-ish)

Postby Facade » 27 Dec 2011 13:15

haha pretty awesome I'm loving all the sounds keep up the good work!
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Re: The abandoned Canterlot Mansion (BGM-ish)

Postby DasDeer » 27 Dec 2011 13:55

Thanks guys, glad you like it.

Still, there is some things left to do. The ending, for example.
Awesome that you liked it tough.
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Re: The abandoned Canterlot Mansion (BGM-ish)

Postby Facade » 27 Dec 2011 14:37

DasDeer wrote:Thanks guys, glad you like it.

Still, there is some things left to do. The ending, for example.
Awesome that you liked it tough.

haha your welcome
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