[wip][complextro] complexthis - feedback for the newbie?

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Re: [wip][complextro] complexthis - feedback for the newbie?

Postby TheMalenEst » 09 Apr 2013 16:43

Sounds pretty good :) but i think the kick is a bit to loud? or maybe that's just me.
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Re: [wip][complextro] complexthis - feedback for the newbie?

Postby hackd » 09 Apr 2013 21:28

The kick volume is fine. You could actually improve it by layering it with a punch.

I would like to hear some variance in your wobble rate. Instead of just 1/8 into like 3/8 or whatever you've got. I would have like every four to eight bars begin with a supersaw stab over a drawn out wub to give some more harmonic content. And then like half the wobble rate like every two bars or something.

The intro lead is a bit sharp, try detuning it or putting some more chorus/reverb or just notching out some frequencies.

And the bass swells like 75% of the way through the track are too loud (try sidechaining them more along with bringing down the total volume.

But it's sounding pretty good so far.
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Re: [wip][complextro] complexthis - feedback for the newbie?

Postby MrCrackles » 10 Apr 2013 09:50

hey ho ^.^

like hackd already said, some rhytmical variety in your bass section would be awesome. ^^

now some questions^^ : do you layer your mid-bass with an external subbass or do you use the sub- frequencies of the mid-bass sound itself?

also what DAW do you use?
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