by Omnomnomnom » 11 Feb 2013 22:40
Yeah, the music subforum is a pretty idiotic one at times, haha. Don't be discouraged!
Anyways, first things first. The song is short. I'm not sure of the nature of this "Atilliary Facilities" you speak of, but 1:22 is short, even for a WIP. Please do lengthen it (but without too much repetition, either!)
Also, it is immediately and overtly known that you're employing sampled, or, "virtual" instruments. Not uncommon for small video game scores, but please exercise some caution (and some degree of expression with midi CC's) when not using real instruments, as it otherwise sounds quite machine-like.
The song sounds a bit cliché, but sometimes that is the intended goal. It's not my place to judge.
Overall, this is doing well, but I cannot give a more personal comment, as I'm unsure of precisely what you're composing these for.
I'm always half-asleep, and I hate dubstep.
Also, you know that other, way more awesome Nomnom guy who shows up on EQD sometimes? THAT PERSON IS NOT ME.
We just happen to have similar pseudonyms.