<pony> <wip> <original> Pinkie Pie Song

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<pony> <wip> <original> Pinkie Pie Song

Postby KillianDunne » 26 Aug 2012 09:32

http://soundcloud.com/killiandunne/wip-pinkie-pie-song

I think some vocals are needed for this but I'm a really bad singer so...

Feedback always welcome.
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Re: <pony> <wip> <original> Pinkie Pie Song

Postby Ohffy » 26 Aug 2012 10:39

umm not that great at criticism im still new to the whole music making thing but at 2:14 that was extremely abrupt you should probably make a smoother transition into that and it all starts pretty abrubtly not that much buildup...but i love how happy it is it really captures pinkie like i said i shouldnt really be giving out advice but those are the main things id change
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Re: <pony> <wip> <original> Pinkie Pie Song

Postby Ohffy » 26 Aug 2012 10:40

And welcome to My Little Remix :D
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Re: <pony> <wip> <original> Pinkie Pie Song

Postby KillianDunne » 26 Aug 2012 11:24

Ohffy wrote:umm not that great at criticism im still new to the whole music making thing but at 2:14 that was extremely abrupt you should probably make a smoother transition into that and it all starts pretty abrubtly not that much buildup...but i love how happy it is it really captures pinkie like i said i shouldnt really be giving out advice but those are the main things id change


Thanks. The abrupt stop was supposed to be quick and random (like Pinkie) but maybe I should work on a better buildup.
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