<original> <pony> Lyra's Serenade

[TechnoMetalDude]

I made a quick song, just testing some soundfonts.

Enjoy and feedback is appreciated!



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcaVUT7fvWw

[Doctor Science]

I really like this. Ethereal, peaceful and mysterious. I would suggest turning the low strings up a bit and keeping them in the middle instead of panning them around. I think it's cool for the high voices, but it feels pretty disorienting when it's in the bass. The break at 3:54ish sounds a little weird. I thought it might have resumed on a weak beat or off the beat, but I tapped it out and it seemed to land on one, so I'm not sure why, but the transition there feels odd to me. I'd like it if you added some more variety to it, but the feel of the piece was relaxed enough for it to not bother me much.

Overall, I think this sounds pretty cool! Hope to hear more like it from you!

[TechnoMetalDude]

Thanks, the reason for the panning thing was because some of the soundfonts i use have an auto panning thing so it sounds like a piano. I have tried to do 2 separate tracks, one for high notes and low to center it, but it ends up sounding worse. thanks.