Some Music I Wrote

[cjseaman]

Well, here they are. Let me know what you think. I'm open to advice.




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I'm 14 and live in San Diego

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[soultensionbenjamin]

keep it up man you might wanna learn some sound desighn but this can have potential

[vladnuke]

The bass is great, the drums could use a little more work, the structuring is pretty solid.

First one, you use that sample wonderfully, the delay added the personal touch needed. In the second one, I could have had more sample work.

Melody-wise it's all good, everything fits nicely, nothing too contrived. Gg

[itroitnyah]

In "Night will last forever" you have dissonance. Might want to learn about chords, scales, and chord progression and stuff. The buildup to the drop seems to have magically disappeared, you should probably add one. The drop also feels a bit empty. Add more percussion, depending on the software you're using, if it's FLS10, add in some soundgoodizers. That should fill in a bit more. And EQ isn't very good imo, as I can't really hear the drums at some parts. like the vocal sampling though.

In "His name is discord" you have pretty much the same problems with dissonance, although the EQing is better. You still have problems with the song not feeling full enough. try adding a better bassline, if you don't have one, and if you do, make it better.

Other than that, I went through what you're going through music production wise, and you'll be able to fix them eventually.