<pony><original> Pony Rave

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<pony><original> Pony Rave

Postby Amnesiac » 16 Jul 2012 16:37

Well, hello again! I've had this one in production for a little while, now.



I'd love to know what you guys think about how I could make my music better! Mixing tips, thoughts, comments, etc.
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Re: <pony><original> Pony Rave

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 17 Jul 2012 19:02

I can feel the emotion in the track, but it's lacking the oomph this kind of music needs. Firstly, that kick has gtg. It's so incredibly weak that it just brings down the track. The snare isn't as bad, but it's suffering from a similar problem. Also, I would low pass that bass. Every time it hits the entire track gets quieter. As for things you could add, I would add a white noise downlifter right at the drops so they hit a bit harder and feel more high-energy. I really like what you did with the melody though.
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Re: <pony><original> Pony Rave

Postby Legendary Emerald » 17 Jul 2012 19:13

Sounds great! I love the melody and overall feel of the song. But I don't have a technically inclined ear like xxDarkShadowxx, so you should probably listen to his constructive criticism more than my blind praise if you're looking to improve.
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Re: <pony><original> Pony Rave

Postby Amnesiac » 18 Jul 2012 07:56

Thanks for the feedback, DarkShadow! I'm still kinda a n00b when it comes to mixing and mastering, so I appreciate the tips. I doubt I'll remaster this for a while, but I'll keep those in mind when making music in the future.

And I'm glad you liked it, Legendary Emerald! Even though "blind praise," as you put it, doesn't directly make me improve, it certainly encourages me to keep trying and get better, so thank you!
I'm monumentally lazy and don't tend to upload much. Welcoming to critique!
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