<pony><original><wip>The Ruined City

[LoreRD]

So, I'm sorta been on/off working on this one for a while, but I have no idea how to continue. Inspired by Fallout: Equestria, specifically the Canterlot Ruins. Any suggestions, and critique on the current version would be greatly appreciated!

http://soundcloud.com/lorerd/the-ruined-city-wip

[MatthewMosierMusic]

How to continue?

If I were you, I'd make this the beginning, then add some heavy drums and bring the intensity up (for the intensity of the battle in that scene). You could use dissonance to your advantage here. I'd personally hang around the 7th and 1st chords or the 4th and 5th chords to get that sound. primarily the former chord of each pair. Keep the audience on the edge of the seat with it. then bring it back to that ending you have already. This would give the song almost a story-line about it.

That's what I would do, at least. but regardless, this is pretty good.

[MrCrackles]

hehe it's kind of funny to hear this one because I started a Fallout Equestria inspired Song about the Ruins,too and it sounds completely different.

on topic: I would like to hear some kind of climax with a touch of danger in it. Maybe with a focus on the strings and some ambientic percussion/noises.

And please don't stop working on this track! It's a potential song for my mp3-player

[LoreRD]

Alright, I'll focus more on the percussion on the next part and try add a sense of eeriness and danger. Don't know when an updated version will be done, but I'll post here when it is.