<pony><original><metal> Ad Luna - Tempus

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<pony><original><metal> Ad Luna - Tempus

Postby Tempus » 16 Nov 2013 22:21

I collaborated with a prominent metalcore vocalist to make a djent track that I'm super proud of! It's been months in the making, I hope everyone likes it! (Sorry if I tagged it wrong, I'm new to this site, haha)




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Re: <pony><original><metal> Ad Luna - Tempus

Postby ganondox » 19 Nov 2013 19:56

"I collaborated with a prominent metalcore vocalist"

He might not be Howard Jones or whatever, but that's pretty impressive. Anyway, not my favorite style, but aside from my personal preference it seems to be a pretty good song.
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Re: <pony><original><metal> Ad Luna - Tempus

Postby EpiPony » 20 Nov 2013 12:32

Oh dear how did i miss this thread.
Djent is awesome and you make it sound epic. Nice.

Anyway, On to critique, the transition at 0:50 sounds really weird IMO. Really sudden/out of the blue.
The clean vocals are kinda repetetive and sound a little off key or something. I don't know i don't really like clean vocals anyway, so it could be me :P

But yeah that's basically everything not that good i have to say about it. Really amazing.
The riffs are really cool and so is the tone. I've heard people try djent in the community (including myself) but you're the first that i've found to actually get the tone right. Also the heavy vocals are freaking epic.
Congratulations. You've made an epic song. Can't wait to see more from you :)
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