<Original><Orchestral Dubstep><Pony> Traitor

[Alycs]

Keep forgetting to post songs here... just wondering if I could get some feedback on this song before publishing it.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/f0w ... or%203.wav

The pony part is going to come from a brief recording I'm going to make but haven't yet.

Its another of the songs that is going to be on my Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons EP; this one is focusing on Fluttershy who (if you are familiar with the FoEq story line) gave Balefire bombs to the zebras, effectively ending the world. As such, I tried to keep this track slightly more upbeat that normal with a track called "Traitor" (because it was done with good intentions rather than maliciousness) .

Enjoy, and if you have feedback it would be greatly appreciated.

[Conduit]

Critiquing as I listen:

-Wow, starts off really suddenly, an intro with just the pad might be nice
-Strings are nice, but a little unclear, some EQ cuts would help
-The drop is cool, but the main synth is pretty weak, some layering with either noise or a bass would help
-The higher wub thing is also pretty weak
-Other then layering and sound design this is really nice, composition works well
-I feel like it could be longer, with a breakdown with just strings, and maybe a piano part

[Alycs]

Thanks, I had actually try adding a bass to the drop synth but I couldn't get it to blend right. I'll try again though. I'll work on all of these; thanks for the critique. c: