<non-pony><original><chill/bass> Another Thing

[Guthey]

https://soundcloud.com/guthey/another-thing-3

So the last track I put up on hear didn't get any feedback, so i'm going to try this again.
In general, i'm looking for some honest criticism and some honest opinions. And please elaborate on it, too. saying "this thing" or "that one sound" is not helpful. If you can't accurately describe a sound, please leave a time frame in which the sound appears. I'm just looking for some opinions and advise, otherwise i'm wasting my time, and I hate doing that. So PLEAAASE, don't be that guy that just clicks and then leaves! Criticism is necessary!
This isn't finished yet either, so some improvements and other ending advise is good also

[3xcel]

The track in general is quite pleasant to the ears. The volume definitely needs to be bumped up a bit though, I can barely hear it with both my internal and soundcloud volume maxed out. That said, it's kind of hard to give detail feedback on something so quiet.

[Guthey]

The track in general is quite pleasant to the ears. The volume definitely needs to be bumped up a bit though, I can barely hear it with both my internal and soundcloud volume maxed out. That said, it's kind of hard to give detail feedback on something so quiet.

I almost pooped myself when i saw someone post on this, thx so much for that. as for the sound, that is very helpful, i thought it was kinda low, even with me using earphones, so thanks for that.

Hmm, okay, well then it looks like feedback wont happen on this either, but thanks for being the one person to say something, cheers to you !

[Totalspark]

Personally I feel the bass is a bit muddy, but it sounds like you're going for more of an ambience feel. Other than that, I enjoyed it.