by @ppleBukker » 08 Oct 2013 23:18
[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JpupqhtCL-o[/youtube]
I think you may have forgotten to post the URL. It's cool, though.
I'm digging your remix. Some critique...
Try adding a little reverb to the piano in the beginning. It's a tad dry. When the vocals and percussion start in, the piano becomes drowned out. Maybe work with EQing and boost the frequency that work best to bring the piano out more.
I'm noticing a little bit of side-chain on the kick. Maybe turn down the compression some. It's great for the pumping feel, but I can't hear much else, rather than the vocals and other percussion.
I really like the instrumental interlude around 2:20. Nice solo at 3:29.
Add some bass to this track. It'd sound nice if maybe you put some eighth notes on the upbeat (if that made sense).
Keep up your work, bro. This is a promising start.