<nonpony><progressive house> Radiate

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<nonpony><progressive house> Radiate

Postby Nine Volt » 21 Oct 2013 15:38

https://soundcloud.com/antevore/radiate
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Re: <nonpony><progressive house> Radiate

Postby A2Z » 21 Oct 2013 22:23

my initial response: maybe automate the reverb mix on the lead synth to cutout right before the next chord in the beginning of the song. it's shaping up really nicely though, a very nice chill sort of jam. also maybe drop down the volume of the hihat after 1:40 or so. seems to cut through a little sharply, taking away from the synths which are dominating those higher frequencies and playing nice melodies. also, at 3:00 I would recommend maybe playing around with automating the volumes of all the synths and see what you want to stand out the most as far as a melody. the counterpoint you have is perfect, it just gets a bit hard to find out what my brain is trying to hear.
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Re: <nonpony><progressive house> Radiate

Postby Totalspark » 22 Oct 2013 08:01

I agree with A2Z about the hihat, I think you should bring it back a bit, it's a little distracting from the rest of the song. Otherwise, I enjoyed it!
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