<pony><original><orchestral> Octavia's Evening Waltz

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<pony><original><orchestral> Octavia's Evening Waltz

Postby Callenby » 13 Oct 2013 20:56

https://soundcloud.com/callenby/waltz

This was supposed to be a quick, simple piece but it ended up taking longer. I'm pretty pleased with the way it's turning out, though.

It's far from finished. Some of the velocities and the overall tempo need tweaking, the transitions are pretty rough, and the mixing still needs work, for instance. But it's mostly turning out the way I want.

Specific things:
- I'm not sure if I am fully satisfied with the way I arranged the strings, especially in the B section. Thoughts?
- The ending. Is it too incongruous with the rest of the piece? I think it may be.
- Any thoughts on the mixing/production side of things? I'm always looking for feedback here.
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Re: <pony><original><orchestral> Octavia's Evening Waltz

Postby DatWhackProducer » 19 Oct 2013 20:52

THAT FUCKIN OBOE. 100/10 kiddo

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