<pony><Original> Pinkie's Party

[Exiled Tenshi]

tell me what you think? -3-

[itroitnyah]

kick is waaay over compressed.

composition definitely needs work. It just seems random. Structuring is decent though

Mixing is just plain awful. You must be new to music though, so don't let that get you bogged down. It's hard for everybody. The whole mix is muddy and elements are drowning each other out, it's just a large mess. You need to be using reverb to help spread out some elements and EQing properly for elements that don't mix well.

The song conveys somewhat of a "party" feeling but putting emotion into the composition could use some work. You'll learn more about that as you get better at composition. Also, "pinkie's party" isn't really an original idea, haha. The idea isn't original, but the composition is (as far as I know). So that's what counts.

It wasn't too awful besides the mixing and some of the composition. You'll get better though, just keep working at it! :)

[WanderPony]

Not a bad track! I like it! It really felt like a song that PInkie would throw! Some points for consideration though, there were a few rough points, not many, but a few.

1: At the beginning, at the end of Pinkie's intro around 0:10, it felt like there was too little towards the "beat" of the song you had built up to that point. You set a fast drum pace very quickly with what Pinkie was saying, then after she was done, it kind of felt like a "trance" feel. You know what I'm talking about, right? Like those songs that make you feel like you're floating in space. It kinda felt like what you had before, with the upbeat fast drums and what not mixed with that "trance" kind of feeling. I honestly had though you turned down the BPM for that part of the song for a second, that's not a bad thing, but the change in style of the song for what it had, and what it gave at that point, was really too sudden, and too much. It's not that the synth was bad, but it was lacking the speedy "punch" in terms of a drum or bass synth to keep the fast, upbeat flow the earlier part had to keep the flow consistent. Perhaps speed up the drums a little bit and make them louder than you originally had them.

2: At around 1:14, you added glitch vocals of Pinkie Pie. I really liked that, it was good, and made it seem really fitting, except for one thing. The "Let's" part of it. It felt like it was too long a glitch sample for the beginning. Maybe something like "L-L-Le-Let's" and the rest. Something that keeps the flow going, it just felt a tiny bit abrupt, like a small speed bump. The rest of the glitch was fine, but that little bit just didn't sound quite right.

That's really all I could find fault, except for maybe adding the glitch vocals in again later, but that's a personal preference thing.
Overall, a good song, and I enjoyed it! Good work!