<Original> <House> Swimming Through Air by Electric Velocity

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<Original> <House> Swimming Through Air by Electric Velocity

Postby Electric Velocity » 10 Apr 2013 17:40

This is for an upcoming album. I tried to mix it the best I could. https://soundcloud.com/electric-velocity/swimming-through-air
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Re: <Original> <House> Swimming Through Air by Electric Velo

Postby 3xcel » 11 Apr 2013 17:02

A rather catchy and mellow melody. I do believe it starts a bit abruptly though. Introducing the main melody and chords from the first second causes the chords to feel a bit repetitive by the time the breakdown ends. The arp was a good idea at adding a bit of variation after the breakdown and definitely fits. Overall, I found it rather enjoyable and uplifting.
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