by hackd » 09 Apr 2013 21:28
The kick volume is fine. You could actually improve it by layering it with a punch.
I would like to hear some variance in your wobble rate. Instead of just 1/8 into like 3/8 or whatever you've got. I would have like every four to eight bars begin with a supersaw stab over a drawn out wub to give some more harmonic content. And then like half the wobble rate like every two bars or something.
The intro lead is a bit sharp, try detuning it or putting some more chorus/reverb or just notching out some frequencies.
And the bass swells like 75% of the way through the track are too loud (try sidechaining them more along with bringing down the total volume.
But it's sounding pretty good so far.