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<wip><original><pony> Toastbeard song: Feedback Appreciated

Postby Quix » 20 Aug 2012 17:25

Thanks for listening! I would really appreciate feedback/criticism. This is going to be my submission for this week's Toastbeard.

Oh, and I need a title! :D

http://soundcloud.com/quix117/fluttershy-wip-2

EDIT: Now with 100% more Fluttershy samples!
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Re: <wip><original><pony> Toastbeard song: Feedback Apprecia

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 21 Aug 2012 06:14

The kick needs more ... uh ... thump,I guess. In fact,the drums in general could be more punchier. The main funky bass line gets a little boring near the end,but the song itself is varied enough.

Title? uhh i don't know... Reherding? Fluttershy gets funky? XD
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