<non-pony><Remix> Too close by Alex Clare Remix

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<non-pony><Remix> Too close by Alex Clare Remix

Postby Atheist Firetruck » 23 Jul 2012 15:02

http://soundcloud.com/atheistfiretruck/too-close-atheist-firetruck

New remix. I would really like some feedback to improve it. Thanks!
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Re: <non-pony><Remix> Too close by Alex Clare Remix

Postby itroitnyah » 23 Jul 2012 15:35

Is it just me, or are you having problems with dissonance still? Great remix otherwise
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Re: <non-pony><Remix> Too close by Alex Clare Remix

Postby Edened » 23 Jul 2012 15:38

The drop at 1:21 is good but the mixing is pretty muddy, it seems really compressed too. Also this is just my opinion but I think the kick is too clicky sounding. The main thing I would work on with this track is the mixing.
It is a great track though, I would love to see it improved.
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Re: <non-pony><Remix> Too close by Alex Clare Remix

Postby Atheist Firetruck » 23 Jul 2012 15:59

What should I do to try to improve the mixing?
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Re: <non-pony><Remix> Too close by Alex Clare Remix

Postby itroitnyah » 23 Jul 2012 16:07

Atheist Firetruck wrote:What should I do to try to improve the mixing?
Parametric EQ 2. Parametric EQ 2 everywhere. Just EQ the crap out of this
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Re: <non-pony><Remix> Too close by Alex Clare Remix

Postby Atheist Firetruck » 23 Jul 2012 16:09

itroitnyah wrote:
Atheist Firetruck wrote:What should I do to try to improve the mixing?
Parametric EQ 2. Parametric EQ 2 everywhere. Just EQ the crap out of this


Haha I'll try
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Re: <non-pony><Remix> Too close by Alex Clare Remix

Postby Atheist Firetruck » 23 Jul 2012 20:24

Sorry for the double post, but does this sound any better? http://soundcloud.com/atheistfiretruck/too-close-remix-trying-to
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Re: <non-pony><Remix> Too close by Alex Clare Remix

Postby Edened » 23 Jul 2012 20:48

Atheist Firetruck wrote:Sorry for the double post, but does this sound any better?


Definitely an improvement :D

The only thing to me is it seems like that lead synth is fighting with the vocals. It may just be me or my headphones.

It's only when that synth is going though. Everything else sounds great.
Comparing the second to the first you made it sound a lot better.
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