by itroitnyah » 20 Jul 2012 07:23
Not bad. You could increase the volume on the voices a bit. They seem a bit quiet. Also, making a song about fluttershy's "yay" is super cliche. If you're gunna submit to EqD, title the submission email "trixie related content" or something like that, and include a cute picture of trixie in the email to make up for the title. That way it will at least grab Seth's attention.