November (feat. Tarby)

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November (feat. Tarby)

Postby Versilaryan » 21 Aug 2011 00:46

http://soundcloud.com/versilaryan/vafrous-coyote-november

Updated version from the Toastbeard compo! Fixed the balance issues there were in the vocal harmonies and some of the guitar parts. Now those chords should sound even tastier.

I'm quite proud of this song. =3 Hope y'all enjoy!

To clarify, I did the slide guitar bit at the beginning, and Tarby did the guitar solo.
And about the "Friends" bit at the end... I honestly did not know the lick was in "I'll Be There For You" when I was noodling around on my guitar and thought it sounded cool. If it really is a problem, I can easily record something else to replace it with -- I have no idea what everyone else thought of it. >.>

Lyrics:

The trees, ablaze with reds and oranges
whisper to the wind
They rustle secrets
to each other

The clouds respond with vacant tears
as they leave the trees behind
But their responses grow
ever colder.

The days grow glum
It's time to wrap up, everypony.
The days grow numb
With warm smiles in every window

Though we all lay all snug at home
with our backs turned to the breeze,
We hear the words they speak
through our windows

The day has come to lend a hoof
to help us say goodbye
The days wave thanks as they
grow ever colder.

The days grow glum
It's time to wrap up, everypony.
The days grow numb
With warm smiles in every window.

As we run on through the leaves
We leave our tears behind
The trees try to follow
if they're able

Our task complete, we head back home
Snuggle up, warm in our graves
And we look forward to next
November.

The days grow glum
It's time to wrap up everypony!
The days grow numb
With warm smiles in every window!
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