The Night That Never Ended (Do Not Go To Sleep!)

[Dr_Dissonance]

http://soundcloud.com/drdissonance1/the-night-that-never-ended-wip
This is a work in progress! It's for Sci's latest competition thing, but I need advice...
The theme is to write a piece for either a fanfic or fanart...I chose "The Night That Never Ended" found here: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/s ... ended.html
I love the psychological implications associated with the pure darkness in the story, so wrote this as an accompaniment for wandering the darkness. So basically to accompany when Twilight and Dashie first appear in the dark Ponyville.
But there's something missing! I feel like I'm forgetting something important with it, but I can't figure it out, so I'm revealing my rubbish early so anyone out there can help! Any ideas folks?

Also, before you listen, AVANT GARDE! RUN!!! Best listened to through headphones!

ALSO ALSO I have no idea what 'Hush Now Quiet Now' has got to do with The Night That Never Ended, but I thought it worked well within the musical context...

[aap998]

I might be deaf but I didn't hear much music

[Dr_Dissonance]

I might be deaf but I didn't hear much music

Ha ha, well, I did warn you!

AVANT GARDE! RUN!!!

[Icky]

This track is amazing. Best toastbeard 05 track for sure, gives me chills every time!
I really love how you manipulate MLP sound samples and make them extremely creepy.
Great song and good fanfic, keep up the good work!

(altough it's placed in the WIP section I cant really give you any feedback on this, sorry)

[Makkon]

Wonderful background music, very eerie. Though I think you could adjust the envelop on some of the choir samples so the notes blend more. I especially liked the distorted singing at the end.