Them Apples' (Feat. Flutterbro)

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Them Apples' (Feat. Flutterbro)

Postby Nix_Spark » 24 Dec 2011 04:54



Here's another something.
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Re: Them Apples' (Feat. Flutterbro)

Postby randomblockfilms » 24 Dec 2011 10:33

whats with all these creepy black hole eyes? they creep meh out. o.o

hmmm sounds kinda a little flat. maybe add more harmonics and background synths. that could make it pop more i guess.
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Re: Them Apples' (Feat. Flutterbro)

Postby Freewave » 24 Dec 2011 14:35

overall its decent but it felt a little directionless. i would recommend looking at your levels as the vocals were a bit loud (and not best choices- although i appreciate that you tried to use some that aren't played in 10 other tracks) and the synths were a bit flat or not as prevalent as they should be. might need a little more work but its not that far off.
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