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<pony><original><Metal>This Crypt

Postby Natas_blackmane » 07 Feb 2016 16:02

Hey every one I just uploaded my first song in almost a year I used a blue usb mic as my mic is broken so the vocals are discorded but it kinda works for this type of music would love to know what you think :D



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Re: <pony><original><Metal>This Crypt

Postby Thunder Dash » 10 Feb 2016 20:14

Ok.

I couldn't understand a single thing you were saying, and by the sounds of it, you were clipping a ton. Plus, your drums are way too repetitive. They sounded like machine guns at best. You may want to change that up because it could start to be a big turn-off.

Your mixing could also use a ton of work. Gotta add some depth to those guitars. They sound like they have too much high-end.

All in all, this piece could use a ton of work, but I'm here to help.
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Re: <pony><original><Metal>This Crypt

Postby DUMBFABRIC » 14 Feb 2016 11:41

Christ this is wonderful mate
HARSH NOISE BRONY WOOOO LOOK AT HOW LOUD I CAN BE

But sometimes in a pinch I can do ambient noise or whatever I guess...

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Re: <pony><original><Metal>This Crypt

Postby Natas_blackmane » 16 Mar 2016 00:27

Thunder Dash wrote:Ok. I couldn't understand a single thing you were saying


Its black metal . . .

Thunder Dash wrote: and by the sounds of it, you were clipping a ton.


I used the worst mic I could find and pushed it to far on purpose that's the effect I was looking for lo-fi and distorted.


Thunder Dash wrote: Plus, your drums are way too repetitive. They sounded like machine guns at best. You may want to change that up because it could start to be a big turn-off.


The drums are like that create a wall of sound effect. blast beat.


Thunder Dash wrote:Your mixing could also use a ton of work.


I mixed it to sound like that Lo-fi.


Thunder Dash wrote:Gotta add some depth to those guitars. They sound like they have too much high-end.


I mixed them to sound like that . . . I was going for a lo-fi black metal sound shit guitar in to a amp in to a shit mic.

Thanks for watching :D
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Re: <pony><original><Metal>This Crypt

Postby Injustrial » 17 Mar 2016 17:34

Black Metal is supposed to sound like they placed a cassette recorder in the middle of the bandroom and hit Rec.
Because that's how it was done.

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Re: <pony><original><Metal>This Crypt

Postby Natas_blackmane » 19 Mar 2016 14:56

Injustrial wrote:Black Metal is supposed to sound like they placed a cassette recorder in the middle of the bandroom and hit Rec.
Because that's how it was done.

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