<pony><twerk><wip> On My Flank

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<pony><twerk><wip> On My Flank

Postby Dreamland200 » 05 Dec 2015 11:23

https://soundcloud.com/fractilx/wip-on-my-flank

This is what's going down for a full hour and this is all I git at the moment, I really dunno if I should finish this but if you guys insist then I will.

If anything, what do i need to adjust for this dank twerk tune?
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Re: <pony><twerk><wip> On My Flank

Postby NightmareRare » 05 Dec 2015 12:42

Finish everything worth finishing man. That's how you build skill. If your in to it do it, if not chuck it, it's not up to myself or the masses to decide whether or not a song is worth your time.
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Re: <pony><twerk><wip> On My Flank

Postby Thunder Dash » 06 Dec 2015 14:33

Ok.

You may want to add a steady chord progression instead of using the "flank" sample only. You were just changing pitches repeatedly to try to come up with a melody line without even a bass line. Why not have the "flank" quote play less and have an actual melody line using a sawtooth. You can interject the "flank" sample as part of your fill-ins.

I suggest you run around the key of Bb minor and have progressions such as

i-i-VI-VII

i-VI-iv-V

i-III-iv-V

i-VII-VI-V

Also, add some aggressive brass and strings hitting the root on an accent like this

1-2-3-4and2-2-3-4...etc.

This way, it won't just be the same sample with altered pitch.
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