<Nonpon><Original><...Daaance?idk> Sundark Alpha

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<Nonpon><Original><...Daaance?idk> Sundark Alpha

Postby Jokeblue » 11 Oct 2015 06:42

Hey guys I did another thing. It's not the best of things but it's a thing regardless!

Had to do this as a Uni assignment yesterday, made it in an afternoon. Also my first time experimenting with synths in FL studio. So yeah tell me whachu think so I can make something better as I'm not really sure if I'm feeling this one.

Anyway, the aim for this assignment was to take a classical piece, and then build a completely new song around a chord progression or two from it. Which results in this whatever the hell thingy with a chord progression based on the opening of Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata.



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Re: <Nonpon><Original><...Daaance?idk> Sundark Alpha

Postby NightmareRare » 25 Oct 2015 08:16

You should pass the bacon more :)

... Meaning you had some great melodies but because your chord progression was on top the whole time it kinda distracted from it, try automating the volume next time so your melodys can have a turn in the spot light. Other then that I loved your compositon on this one :D well done!
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