<Nonpon><Original> For Every Dream

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<Nonpon><Original> For Every Dream

Postby Jokeblue » 21 Jul 2015 10:37

Hey been a while since I've uploaded a track and for some reason at 2:30am I decided it would be a good idea. Did this for uni not to long ago, tell me what you think or something.

Spoiler Lyrics:
Resting a moment by the lantern
Transcend from nightmares into dreams
Though their relationships aren’t foreign, I’ll fall in
Love with the arms that welcome me

Time in this world passes differently
And I can’t seem to see it’s seems
This lucid sleep hints at reality’s duality
What life could drag me from this dream?

From this dream
From this dream

Sit here a moment with me darling
In place to waste our weary souls
Question your heart and what’s ensconced within, porcelain skin
To feel the warmth you wished to know

Lie here a moment with me darling
Absorb the gash that spills out stars
Before the shimmering abyss I feel abysmal, as I
Realize the dreaming dreamers scars

Dreamers scars
Dreamers scars

And when the still skies bare a blood red moon
Insight and truth unveil a world brand new
Phase through dimensions, see our worlds are now three
And just two are shared by you and me

And when the early morning starts to loom
I fear the nightmares cycle starting anew
I’ll close my eyes and let awakening guide
Knowing you’ll be with me for every dream

To end the nightmare

For every dream…
(You’re worth the nightmare)
For every dream…
(You’re worth the nightmare)
For every dream…
(You’re worth the nightmare)
For every dream…
(You’re worth the nightmare)


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Re: <Nonpon><Original> For Every Dream

Postby guitarfan01 » 21 Jul 2015 18:43

Live commenting:

I really like the vibe and trip-hop style beat...
Great little internal near rhymes with "are foreign, I'll fall in" "reality's duality" etc
Not sure what's going on in the last few stanzas.

Fun to listen to.
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Re: <Nonpon><Original> For Every Dream

Postby Jokeblue » 22 Aug 2015 10:55

thanks, was fun to make :3

one of my biggest concerns is the lack of bass and the staticness of the song in terms of the drums and chords. Not sure if that gets a pass over due to style or whatnot. Speaking of which, what the hell kind of genre is this anyway?
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