Anyways, I don't actually hear any hardstyle components :p You've got a stable base but try switching up the melody a bit after like eight bars. Sort of like a part 2 to the verse.
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I'm serious though. It's a cool concept, but it's just not going to work. If you add heavy supersaw melodies, just make it hardstyle. Have the half-time kick snare pattern? Just add wobbles and make it dubstep.
Don't combine the two.
Take this for example:
Absolute horse shit. Seriously. At least until the real hardstyle pattern comes in.