by vladnuke » 26 Mar 2013 15:27
The drums could use a bit brighter high end, the bass can be side chained against the kicks, there could be a repeating vocal sample (very important to being Daft Punk). Also the kicks could be a bit more compressed, they need a bit more punch. Also, whatever pads you have, I'd just get rid of them, house depends on space, and when you're missing that room, you're going to be struggling to bring out the rest of the instruments.
At 0:45, there's a melody. That melody is too quiet. Make it louder.
So, TL;DR: Vocals, Kicks, and swing.
That's all you need for a good Daft Punk song.
Also your bass is too weak, I mean, it's supposed to be subdued, but most importantly it's supposed to be audible.
Match your kicks with your bass hits. No long bass notes, quick short bass hits.
Just stuff of the top of my head.
Or you could, idk, try to make something more you than Daft Punk.
I mean, if you want to sound exactly like Daft Punk, I'm sure there's a bunch of their patches on the interwebs you can download.
But there's already a Daft Punk. And they're very good at being Daft Punk, and so far no one has really beat them at that.