by Genkar » 07 Mar 2013 18:34
The reese feels almost completely soloed in the beginning, bring out the arps a bit more through the intro. You might want another bass or some heavier subs backing the reese, just to fill some of the empty space. Okay, now I'm at a portion in the song where the reese isn't really the focus of attention, and it's kinda hard to hear the modulation on it through everything else going on. Vox at 1:31 sound out of time, and they're a bit quiet.
The main problem is you really just started the song out with a reese, and brought everything in, so it gets pretty repetitive pretty fast, and it starts to feel a bit monotone after a while. The other main problem is the mixing, the way it is now, everything fights for space. Mix further down, make sure you're EQing everything pretty differently, and if you need to, pan some things to the right or left a bit. It's still pretty good, you just need to do a lot of work on your mixing.