by Callenby » 03 Mar 2013 23:17
I'm logging off the computer in a second but before I do I want to give some quick feedback.
I've never heard of Lon Lon Ranch so on that score I can't help you.
I would suggest either removing or changing that choir patch (that is supposed to be a choir, right?). It sounds very out of place here, or at least that's how I feel.
The timbre changes perhaps a little too much too often. You don't necessarily have to add or remove any patches, just edit them make it a tad more consistent as a whole. That may have more to do with personal taste, though, so you can ignore that. You can ignore everything I say, actually.
That's all I can give right now, sorry. I hope it helps.
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