[Original][Non-Pony][breakbeat] Ohffy vs Making a Song

[Ohffy]

Im Baaaaaaack~
yeah so i messed around with it and finally finished my first attempt at a song. I felt the drums were a bit boring so i cut it up a tad. Please feel free to criticize thanks for listening MLR!

http://soundcloud.com/ohffy/ohffy-vs-making-a-song

[Hangin' From A Cloud]

I don't know why, but this song is strangely familiar... Oh wait, I know now! I listened to the WIP some time ago. Glad to see you finished it .
Onto the song then!
First thing I noticed is that the chimes and the strings sometimes go out of sync (like 1:22).
Adding variations to the drums was a nice touch.
I really like the instruments and the melody here (as I may have said before).
That's all I can think of right now. Overall I like it, but the out-of-sync parts throw it off a bit.

[FLAOFEI]

Sounds cool, but a bit repetetive imo.
It would be realy cool if you instead of looping the drumms, alterd the beat throughout the song.

[Ohffy]

A lot of people (a whopping 3/5 people) are saying that the drums get boring and repetitive guess i needa fix that. And yeah Im listening to it again and it does get out of sync ugh ill fix it later.

Thanks for the help!