[Nonpony][Original] Break Glass

[XetaKnight]

This is my first real electronic song that I have made. I had to scrap and edit ideas multiple times and after about 2-3 weeks this popped out. I really don't know what genre this it but I based the idea off of UKF's Cracks and the music from Portal and Portal 2. I have EQed it to play accordingly to three different styles of headphones so it should sound alright. Anyways, with out further adieu here is Break Glass:
http://soundcloud.com/xetaknight/break-glass-1

P.S turn your volume down, it may or may not be too loud.
P.P.S If there are any suggestion you wish to make, by all means, feel free to tell them.
EDIT: I have re-equalized the song and added to the intro thanks to some suggestions that were made, enjoy!

[Hangin' From A Cloud]

Hey there, welcome to MLR! Enjoy your stay
On to the song then:
I feel the intro is a bit repetitive.
1:25 BAMM comes the bass. Maybe a bit too loud. Yes, too loud. You did warn me though.
And the transitions in the second part of the song are too sudden. Try adding reverses/crescendos/silence to make it sound better.
You have some mixing issues (we all have,don't worry) (I can't even hear the kick).Try using EQs to get unwanted frequencies out of the way, and try to free frequencies for some instruments (like the kick).
Okay I think I'm done.

[XetaKnight]

Hey there, welcome to MLR! Enjoy your stay
On to the song then:
I feel the intro is a bit repetitive.
1:25 BAMM comes the bass. Maybe a bit too loud. Yes, too loud. You did warn me though.
And the transitions in the second part of the song are too sudden. Try adding reverses/crescendos/silence to make it sound better.
You have some mixing issues (we all have,don't worry) (I can't even hear the kick).Try using EQs to get unwanted frequencies out of the way, and try to free frequencies for some instruments (like the kick).
Okay I think I'm done.

Thanks for the info, I will get on to fixing all what you suggested as soon as possible.