by PhillyPu » 13 Jul 2012 10:41
You say this is hardcore? Huh. You might want to amp up the gain, and distort that bass drum of yours. The subbass is also lacking.
But aside from the genre-issues, it sounds nice and simple. You might want a duet of melodies. That always fill in the empty spaces nicely. A nice flowing melody would also work. Not a looping one, mind you. Something that brings you through the song and keeps your attention. Considering that this is a remix, you're going to have to rely on aspects other than the original melody to keep the audience's attention. Perhaps a high hoover solo! Or maybe a drum break! Okay maybe not the drum break.
But yeah, this so far sounds a bit unfinished due to the fact that the solo synth doesn't seem to hold on its own when played against the "My BBBFF".
Keep working at it!