<Non-pony><WIP><Original>Need feedback on an unamed track.

[the4thImpulse]

I have been working on this one for about 2 weeks now, it has been a great learning experience for me and my best track yet! I would love to have some feedback on it, I was also thinking of adding some sort of vocals to it and would like to submit it to the Seeds of Kindness album.

Its progressive house.

http://soundcloud.com/the4thimpulse/needs-a-title-wip

For those that care it was made with Live and uses all my own original synth patches with Z3ta+, Massive, and my X-Station hardware synth.

[bigBerd]

This is good. Sounds a bit less punchy than most house, which I like.The shift at around 2:45 is probably my favorite part of the track, it creates sort of a change of scenery, for lack of a better word. What do you have in mind in the way of vocals?

[the4thImpulse]

Thank you, do you have any ideas how how to improve the mix or anything? One thing I try to do in my electronic music is not just have a bunch of loops thrown together and have the track go nowhere, I want it to change throughout the track although this one isn't a great example of it. As for vocals I dont really have any ideas as of now on what I could do with the track.